The Hook for WARLOCK

Here is the hook that I have in mind to draw readers in. The picture is just something I stumbled across while researching dragons.

Keiron Nathron. Warlock. Gifted with vast power he can barely control. Brash. Helplessly in love with Nysana.

Nysana Merethyl. Maja. Peerless with the blade. An opportunity for her freedom might spell trouble for Keiron—the fatal kind.

Surogeth. King of the dragons. Child of the Titans. Powerless to stop his race from succumbing to the madness that is rapidly devouring their minds.